Sam, you have met the deadline and are working well at a level 3 at the moment. I am constantly looking for ways that you can improve your work to guarantee you the best grades possible and so here are a few areas for you to work on: 1) Your blog entries are all here, but they lack a few comments linking them together -the idea is that you take the examiner on a journey of your thoughts and ideas, so you need to make him/her aware of why you've done certain pieces of work, what they show/illustrate and what you take from them. 2) Your flat plans lack some deatil and are a bit 'organised ad clean' which actually isn't very "rock" - develop these please. 3) Your shots are clear and good but you need to add more details of mise-en-scene. 4) Your deconstructions are weak and this could let you down. Re-look at these (particularly the Oasis one) and add detail of connotations and layout features - perhaps then comment on how you will use all of these things in your own work. Otherwise, well done and Happy New Year! Miss L :-)
Sam, you have met the deadline and are working well at a level 3 at the moment. I am constantly looking for ways that you can improve your work to guarantee you the best grades possible and so here are a few areas for you to work on:
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2) Your flat plans lack some deatil and are a bit 'organised ad clean' which actually isn't very "rock" - develop these please.
3) Your shots are clear and good but you need to add more details of mise-en-scene.
4) Your deconstructions are weak and this could let you down. Re-look at these (particularly the Oasis one) and add detail of connotations and layout features - perhaps then comment on how you will use all of these things in your own work.
Otherwise, well done and Happy New Year! Miss L :-)