Video Blog Evaluation

I'm really bad at these...

Peer Assessment on Front Cover

Yesterday in our lesson we went around looking at everyone's first document. Mine was the first to be looked at and I got the following feedback-


Pros:
Good use of house style
Consistent colours (Red, black, white)
Good use of lighting
Good masthead and pun


Cons:
Could do with more cover lines
Possibly a big cover line in the centre of the page
Mixed opinions on whether the masthead was difficult to read against the background


I was pretty pleased with my feedback from my peers as it was mostly positive. The main problem from what I gathered from the feedback was that I need another cover line somewhere on the page as there is not enough pull towards the magazine, so I think I will just add in a small cover line in a bit of space that I can find as I dont want to change to whole composition of the page. I dont really agree that the masthead is hard to read as to me it seems quite easy so I think I will just keep it like it is.

Magazine Front Cover Draft

This is the first draft for my front cover. I have also uploaded the original image and the front cover without the background image so you can compare.

Photoshoot Images

I uploaded all of my images from the photoshoot to photobucket, they can be seen here:
http://s1079.photobucket.com/albums/w519/samcarden123/

Photoshoot Storyboard